1. Would It Be Ok?
Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?
Would it be ok if I opened my heart?
Published: January 2022
she wasn't my first love, but she was the first woman that I've loved and its so hard to describe how I feel about her
Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?
Would it be ok if I opened my heart?
I might not be the kind of boy everyone would call a perfect boyfriend. I might not have everything and might not be able to make you smile every time I was an alcoholic, a gangster, a jerk,...
Analysis of Form and Technique
Amazing and beautiful,
not a flower or a tree.
Much prettier than that,
and only I can see.
Beautiful poem. I love it. One of my favorite poems from Familyfriendspoems.com .
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If I thought for just one moment that this would be my last breath,
I'd tell you I'll love you forever, even beyond death.
If I thought for just one moment that your face would be the last I'd see,
I'd take a million pictures and save them just for me.
I have stage 4 breast cancer. My husband and I will be married 20 years next April. I cannot share this poem with him yet. In our situation it would be too difficult for now. I am still doing...
Analysis of Form and Technique
To love is to share life together,
to build special plans just for two,
to work side by side,
and then smile with pride,
Love is the thing that keeps you up all night because you'd rather talk to that person than sleep. Love can be the best feeling in the world and also the worst. It can bring you higher than...
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When I first met you,
I felt like I had known you forever,
telling you my secrets
and what I didn't want ever.
I had been dating a man for a few months and he always had a wall up. I sent him this poem after a very deep conversation. His response was WOW. I asked of course, "Good wow or bad? Did I...
Why are you so beautiful?
Why do you take my breath away?
How did I get so lucky?
How are you perfect in every single way?
I knew so many things before I actually met Janette. I knew how to love. I knew why we went to work every day. I knew how to act. The reality of this is I did not know a single thing. I am...
Anyone can tell you they love you.
Anyone can flatter you and tell you you're beautiful.
Anyone can make you smile and happy.
Anyone can promise you the world
Wow, I am touched by the words. So beautifully written down in love. I feel like I'm the luckiest guy in the world. So romantic indeed.
Some people believe there is one,
The one who points your way to the sun.
A person they believe makes them complete,
The one who will support when facing defeat.
My girlfriend's name is Fereshte, and she is in the hospital. We are far, far away because she lives in the city I used to live before. Right now we are thousands of kilometers away, but our...
You're the one I can't live without.
This fact is true, I have no doubt.
I love the way you smile at me.
I love the way together we're free.
My boyfriend made me a poem just like this when we first started dating! It brought back some memories!
I think of you in the morning
before the sun rises,
when in the still of the darkness
my heart feels your presence.
The best poem I've read in a long time (and I love poems): soft, gentle, evocative, thoughtful, and able to create the same complexity of emotions in the reader. I'm grateful this morning...
I praise God for sending me you, my love.
I praise him for changing my view.
Now you are here with me, and I'm here with you.
Now will you let me love you?
My beloved woman is a black African from Uganda. It is the greatest miracle in the universe! I use the poetry here to dedicate to her every day before going to work and show how grateful I am...
She has her own special way
Of turning around my terrible day.
She makes all the bad things go away
The second that she says hey.
I think for 13 you're a very mature young man. Don't turn into that guy women/girls hate. Treat her like a queen; she will treat you like a king, and don't cheat on her. Just break it off...
I have a feeling
That I can't comprehend.
In my deepest thoughts you are
More than just a friend.
I got sent this poem by someone online who has fallen in love with me. Even though I didn't want it to happen, as we live to far away from each other and other life commitments will always...
Have you ever met someone you think about
every night and every day,
someone so beautiful it's breathtaking
and words just aren't enough to say?
Loving you....
The first time I saw you
I didn't really like you
For the reason that
I am afraid to love you.
But the more I know you,
The more I love you.
For this is all I...
I always knew that love would come find me someday,
but never did I know that it would be you who was headed my way.
You caught me off guard and took me by surprise,
but you simply captivated me, the same way you do when I look into your eyes.
What beautiful words! It made my heart pound and brought tears to my eyes. I've been falling for a man I just met, but we haven't even met yet (in person). We choose to love slowly and not...
I fell in love with this girl. I tried my best and we became friends. I sacrificed virtually all for her, but when I told her my feelings, she said we're better off as friends because being...
Sometimes I wonder how I feel about you,
Scared of these feelings because it's still new
I catch myself thinking of the best way to share,
Hoping you'll return my confession showing you care
That is so true. I got married last year, but because I didn't know how to express my love for my husband, he left. Now that I think about everything, I have a lot of love for him, but in...
What I see is a great poet being born. I am highly impressed. What I see is my emotion flying free.
Analysis of Form and Technique
When I am without her,
the sun doesn't shine as brightly.
When I am without her,
the clouds are dark and foreboding.
I met her in med school. She is called Mariam. She is so amazing, and being with her is the most beautiful thing in my life. Her smile makes me feel heaven is for real. I am gland to say I...
In your arms you hold me tight,
Never letting go through the night.
All my dreams are peaceful because of you,
Holding me in your arms like you do.
I liked her from class 6 but never got the chance to tell her, but eventually I became very close to her. When I was in class 9, I had gathered the courage to say it to her, and fortunately,...
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